http://emil-sokolskij.livejournal.com/ ([identity profile] emil-sokolskij.livejournal.com) wrote in [personal profile] alex_vinokur 2011-11-14 08:27 am (UTC)

Да, я же говорю, что запятая мне вполне кажется уместной. Точка - "как максимум". Но вот перечитал и вижу, что, конечно, с точкой стихотворение выглядело бы скачкообразным.
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